So I’m coloring the pages now, but initially I didn’t… and the reason for that was because of these first two awful attempts. Hamster Rage is primarily an experiment in pushing myself artistically and trying to force myself to grow. Some of these pages succeeded really well and some of them failed because I either didn’t know what I was doing or I didn’t spend as much time on them as I should have.
Storytelling wise… you should start the story at the last possible moment. I think I succeeded there but not in the overall execution of the page. There’s alot here I would change.
Thanks for reading!